Finally I thought I had finished the actual product for my WISE but after looking at it numerous times it seemed to me as if something was missing. I think it is the lack of Aboriginal colours and even colour in general. The sequins representing the people aren't enough colour. So I have decided that I will add some words in colour, placed randomly on the page to help explain what the actual circle sentencing is. This way the aboriginal colours will be introduces as well as people having a better understanding on what circle sentencing is or at least the ideas associated with it.
I have also decided that I will add more 'traditional' Aboriginal people (2) also to my collage possibly either side of the modern aboriginal man being sentenced in the centre. At the moment, the man in the centre could be anyone off the street. By adding these, this will also represent how aboriginal people have also become more modern thus the ways that they are being sentenced and treated also need to be updated. If this doesn't look good, I may replace the modern aboriginal man and the added Aboriginal men with just one Aboriginal man with a more 'traditional' appearance.
A black border may also be needed to frame the page but this idea will be investigated.
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